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Rated: 13+ · Message Forum · Research · #1050803

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Apr 19, 2006 at 8:56pm
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Re: Question on voice
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Hey there,

I took a quick look at your piece, and I would recommend #2, external conflict. As you said, #1 would be incredibly dry; focusing on various characters as in #3 would be difficult since you have primarily just one developed character; and I personally don't care for #4. My thoughts...I'll come back to give you a real review later.

Lorien

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Question on voice · 04-19-06 12:41pm
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