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Aug 9, 2006 at 5:21pm
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Is this a horrible sentence?
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I know I made up the verb, but it fits in the tone of the story (a YA lit book about a high school girl). So tell me, and be brutal: is this a horrible sentence?

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Is this a horrible sentence? · 08-09-06 5:21pm
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Re: Is this a horrible sentence? · 08-09-06 5:28pm
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Re: Is this a horrible sentence? · 08-10-06 1:33am
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