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Whew, you're right, I completely missed that. I almost thought an entire re-write would be needed, but here's the fix: Angry words scratched upon the page Muscles taunt the tension of my soul Mere words framed in my mind enrage Tear, tear the page from the roll Full of anger and negative energy Face appears like a troll My frustration begins to flee The blender shreds the evidence I no longer suffer the pain of me Pouring the pulp into a dense Dekle made of plastic and wood Squeezing the water I'm not tense Glitter and shine done what it could Making pretty from consuming rage A beautiful new page, as it should. |