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Dec 24, 2018 at 10:46am

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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Form of the week: Golden Shovel

by Tinker

Wow, that’s a whole lot of stuff to get your poem.

Does your poem have a title?

Interesting Golden Shovel, love the Kipling line. The rhythm is fluid and the content read line by line makes sense. . Although I think L2 should have “be” before the word “worthy”. Maybe you were just typing too fast. Nice.

~~Tink

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Form of the week: Golden Shovel · 12-20-18 5:42pm
by Dave

Re: Form of the week: Golden Shovel · 12-20-18 7:20pm
by Jayne

Re: Re: Form of the week: Golden Shovel · 12-21-18 1:15am
by Tinker

Re: Re: Jayne's comments on Form of the week: Golden Shovel · 12-21-18 9:50am
by Dave

Re: Tink’s Form of the week: Golden Shovel added bonus... · 12-21-18 2:20am
by Tinker

Re: Re: Tink’s Form of the week: Golden Shovel added b... · 12-21-18 10:02am
by Dave

Re: Re: Re: Tink’s Form of the week: Golden Shovel add... · 12-21-18 11:03am
by Tinker

Re: Re: Re: Re: Tink’s Form of the week: Golden Shovel... · 12-21-18 6:24pm
by Dave

Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Tink’s Form of the week: Golden Sh... · 12-21-18 7:55pm
by Tinker

Re: Form of the week: Golden Shovel · 12-21-18 12:40pm
by Past Member 'oldmonty'

Re: Re: Monty's Form of the week: Golden Shovel · 12-21-18 6:30pm
by Dave

Re: Re: Form of the week: Golden Shovel · 12-21-18 7:59pm
by Tinker

Re: Re: Re: Form of the week: Golden Shovel · 12-22-18 11:19am
by Past Member 'oldmonty'

Re: Re: Re: Re: Form of the week: Golden Shovel · 12-24-18 12:14am
by Elycia Lee ☮

Re: Re: Elycia's Form of the week: Golden Shovel · 12-24-18 7:55am
by Dave

Re: Re: Re: Elycia's Form of the week: Golden Shovel · 12-24-18 10:22am
by Elycia Lee ☮

Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Form of the week: Golden Shovel · 12-24-18 10:46am
by Tinker

Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Form of the week: Golden Shovel · 12-24-18 9:58pm
by Elycia Lee ☮

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