~ The Poet's Place Cafe~

Jake, I love the bluesy tone of this and the door both as figurative and literal imagery.

Yes the form requires word count not syllable count and it also dictates 1 more line. But form or not your poem reads a little unfinished like there is one more thought to share and you just didn't get around to it.

I think this has the potential of being something better than just an exercise in writing a form. I'm curious to read what you left off.

~~Tink