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Aug 2, 2019 at 11:24am
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Re: Jake's Little Willie's Poem
by Dave Author IconMail Icon
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First stanza is missing a line. Perhaps ending it with something like "he decapitated his mum" would do the trick?

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Jake's Little Willie's Poem · 08-02-19 4:17am
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Re: Jake's Little Willie's Poem · 08-02-19 10:31am
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*Star* Re: Jake's Little Willie's Poem · 08-02-19 11:24am
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Re: Re: Jake's Little Willie's Poem · 08-02-19 11:29am
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