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Free verse poetry evolved from a desire of writers at the beginning of the twentieth century to alter the tone of the poem because of change in attitude toward literature in general, and poetry in particular, where concerns about the suitability of subject matter receded and the relationship between writer and reader became less formal. The term implies total freedom from any type of design or structure. This is not the case at all. In traditional poetry, the fixed shape of the meter, rhyme, and stanza creates an emotional distance which facilitates universal acceptance. The poet writing free verse must compensate for the lack of traditional structure by designing the title, line, stanza, and rhythm to provide the greatest impact in an efficient manner. Otherwise, the poem will be nothing more than prose in disguise. Careful design of the word selection and arrangement, the length and density of each line, and the breakdown of stanzas must provide a natural rhythm. That is, through much toil in search of precise language, experimentation with forming lines and stanzas, and extensive revision, the poet carefully crafts a work that appears natural, authentic, and convincing to the reader. Here are a couple of examples: Where I come from land lies flat as paper.
Pine, spruce, holly like dark words
left from a woods. Creeks coil, curve,
enigmatic as women. To know the depths
you must dream. In the mountains
for college I walked up and could see
barns, cows, house smoke, but no boats.
Hillsides of winesaps, still, perfect.
Here my little boat takes the night Bay.
One far neon light tosses, a city
people walk alone, its rhythmic
landscape cut from marshes and cries.
On black water it is all mine, first
beginnings, endings, love's beauties.
So when I move, it moves under me, and knows me.
~'Night Pleasures' by Dave Smith
ASSIGNMENT: Write a free verse poem about your occupation or hobby. Let the creativity flow from your soul! Dave "The Poet's Place " |
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