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Feb 1, 2020 at 4:47pm
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Re: Form of the week: Cuarteto
by Past Member 'oldmonty'
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I will try it, maybe my rhyme scheme is wrong?

TOO MANY CLOUDS

I am looking up to the stars in the sky,
Above these grassy lands they make a ceiling.
Gold in the stars covered by clouds floating by,
Still pride in america is my feeling.

Just sitting here and breathing the fresh night air
And thinking of those old thoughts from long ago
When all here in this country were treated fair,
Now nobody seems to know which way to go.

A sig I created for myself
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Form of the week: Cuarteto · 01-30-20 8:53pm
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Re: Form of the week: Cuarteto · 01-30-20 10:14pm
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Re: Jay O'Toole's Form of the week: Cuarteto · 01-31-20 4:45pm
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Re: Re: Jay O'Toole's Form of the week: Cuarteto · 01-31-20 11:05pm
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Re: Form of the week: Cuarteto · 01-30-20 11:30pm
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