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Mar 14, 2023 at 8:06pm
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Edited: March 14, 2023 at 8:49pm
Re: DISCUSSION: Moments of Truth
Rite of Passage

A speech finished.
A burden diminished.

With a sigh and tinny plop,
I collapse into a folding chair,
careful not to snag my gown,
grinning to endless iterations
of Pomp and Circumstance.

A wistful tear slithers,
adolescence withers.

When the moment comes,
for the first time,
a two-fingered fling
of a black square cap
actually feels fitting.

A soggy-cheeked hug,
heartstrings tug.

Still, this isn’t the end.
Graduation to this new life,
so similar to the old,
except, for the first time,
it was mine.
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Re: WriterAngel's DISCUSSION: Moments of Truth · 03-15-23 11:53am
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