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Chapter #5

Jared runs into Tommy at school

    by: scriptboy Author IconMail Icon
There was a commotion going on in the vast hallways of JFK High School that day when two bullies, Gus and Bart, had cornered Tommy, the skinny, nerdy boy, for not having done the homework assignment form them.

“I’m sorry I didn’t write your English paper, okay? I was busy!” Tommy pleaded with Gus as Bart held him pinned against the lockers.

“I should punch you in the face! Thanks to you, I’m gonna get an F in English!” Gus growled at him. “I’m gonna punch you in the face!”

A crowd was forming. A dozen students came to look what was going on, including Jared.

Gus picked up Tommy by his shirt and he was about to punch him in the face.

“P-p-please don’t punch me…. I’ll write the paper today!” Tommy pleaded. “I can’t write it if you hurt me!”

Gus then hurled Tommy’s body into the small crowd, where Tommy landed right against Jared, knocking him over. This triggered an earlier spell, which Drew had cast on him in the library a few weeks earlier. When Tommy comes too close to Jared, this causes his muscles to grow!

Tommy lay on top of Jared for a few moments, causing Jared’s muscles suddenly to bulge everywhere!

“Uhh… Ohmygosh…. OOHHHH…. UHHHH…” Jared groaned as he still lay on the ground while Tommy was trying to get up. But having Tommy lying on top of him was enough to cause his muscles to blow up!

Jared’s pecs doubled in size as his arms suddenly became so massive that he ripped out of his t-shirt! Jared’s legs burst out of his jeans while his legs blew out and ripped the lower jeans apart. Jared was HULKING OUT!

“AARRRRGHHHH!” Jared roared, causing Gus and Bart to look on when Jared got on his feet, no longer looking like an ordinary kid but like a huge, massive bodybuilder!

“I HATE BULLIES!” Jared roared as he stood on his feet with muscles bulging everywhere! Jared was suddenly over 7 feet tall, and he looked GIGANTIC! His shoulders were massive, and his arms were colossal. He was bigger than Mister Universe! “DON’T BULLY MY FRIENDS!”

Using his massive hands and arms, Jared punched Gus in the stomach, and he grabbed Bart by the shirt and hurled him against the row of steel lockers. Both boys were out COLD!

Then he lovingly walked over to Tommy and picked him up in his huge arms.

“Tommy? Tommy? Are you alright?” Jared said while holding Tommy in his arms like a baby.

“Ohh… Jared… Uhh… Thanks, dude! I know you’d come to save me!” Tommy said groggily.

“You’re gonna be okay, bro!” Jared said quietly as all the other kids looked on.

Jared took Tommy to the nurse’s station. The two other boys got up and they left the school, limping home. They never knew what had hit them.
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