This choice: Husbands usually give their wives a foot massage...and my feet are rather sore.. • Go Back...Chapter #10Luffy is Really Bad at Foot Massages by: Lelouch   A silence ensued after Hancock's embarassing comment. Was she too direct? Did she succeed in disgusting Luffy instead of getting a chance to be with him? She spoke with Sanji about the subject of married couples to great detail, and while he seemed to be getting the wrong impression he gave Hancock valuable knowledge of the field. But as experiences have told her Luffy was an exception to most rules; was it too much? Her nerves almost couldn't handle the wait. "Um...Luffy?" The entire silence Hancock couldn't even look the Captain in the eye, and when she finally did...he was asleep?! "LUFFY!!"
"Wah!" Strawhat fell to his side in surprise and looked up to the giantess, "Hiya Hancock! What were ya saying?" Hancock sighed and began to repeat herself only to be interrupted, "Wait I remember now! You said your feet were sore and asked for a foot rub right?"
Luffy missed the entire husband and wife part, much to Hancock's dismay. "Well...not exactly, you see I said...."
Luffy cut her off again, "Your feet are sore right? Cause I'm more than willing to help a friend!" He flexed his muscles like he was showing off.
Hancock wore a love filled expression, taking the acceptance like a marriage proposal. "Oh my! Luffy, are you sure dear?" The empress almost let out tears of joy; Luffy admitted he liked her (In her head anyway.) Such relief flowed throughout her body that Hancock fell to the floor with a soft thud. Her back against her bed and her bare feet stretched out a good five to six feet before her.
Still in her hand Luffy grasped none of this romantic stuff Hancock was fantasizing about; "Yeah, it's just a foot rub. No big deal." Hancock was too lost in her own mental fantasies to notice his words; leaving Luffy with nothing to do but hop from Hancock’s hand and calmly walk to her bare soles. It took the giantess several minutes before she realized Luffy was even gone, and with a gasp she leapt forward and stood at her full towering height. “Luffy! Where are you?!” Some ticklish sensations came from under Boa’s left foot, she lifted it and sure enough; the rubber man was stuck to her sole like a piece of gum. The ticklish feeling was his mouth moving in an attempt to talk. “Sorry Luffy, I lost track of you for a second and overreacted.” Gently she peeled Luffy from her sole. Funnily he was perfectly unharmed, albeit he was as flat and thin as one of Hancock’s toe nails. He poofed back into shape in an instant though and relief flew throughout Hancock once again. “So you can’t die if I accidently step on you, that’s good to know.”
This time paying keen attention to Luffy Hancock sat back down and brought Luffy to her feet again, stretching her lovely soles to the captain as if she were giving a show. Even the girl’s feet were amazingly beautiful, despite living in a jungle-like tribe of people as well as the life of a pirate Hancock’s bare feet were absolutely flawless. Perfectly applied red toe nail polish, no dirt or grime, hell the only thing on the foot was sweat and that was a turn on with the way Hancock came off to most men. To Luffy however…it was just another foot, nothing special. The captain bent over and placed his knuckles along the ground, looking up at Hancock with a grin, “Ready?” The giantess nodded and as soon as she did Luffy vanished in a puff of smoke.
It wasn’t just any smoke either it only appeared due to one event…Luffy had activated his Gear Second! The smoke cleared in seconds and there stood Luffy, looking no different aside from a more rubbery appearance. Hancock instantly realized why the Strawhat Captain used such a drastic measure so quickly, but it didn’t mean she liked it any. It endangered Luffy that was the big draw back to this technique. It blessed Luffy with speed beyond belief but it hurt him at the same time. Hancock wanted to protest, but it was already done and Luffy would not hear of it anyway. So she just leaned her head back and awaited the foot pleasure.
Luffy stretched his arms back a few feet, “Gomu Gomu….JET RAPID!” With his increased speed Luffy begun a punching spree with Hancock’s two feet, going so fast his arms weren’t even visible. You see, someone like Luffy did not know the meaning of the word gentle. Luffy would find a way to ruin a garden of flowers while physically unable to move, and given something as delicate as a woman’s foot he of course messed that up too. No gentleness, no not at all. That was too slow, the way Luffy figured it he needed some force to get Hancock to feel anything at all; plus it was an interesting way to practice his abilities. So he pummeled the giant feet without sign of hesitation.
Hancock closed her eyes, expecting a massage to top all massages. However what she felt was a most unpleasant feeling. One that increased over time. Without warning the pain receptors on her feet were going crazy as she detected that Luffy isn't massaging her, but rather punching her. Each blow feels like she's stepping on broken glass. Gritting her teeth she holds silent as she tries her best to endure this assault.
Luffy on the other hand can feel his punches affecting Hanock's soles. The once perfect and smooth soles now look irritated with reddish spots all over. Making a fist Luffy takes aim and launches another punch towards the wall of flesh of Hancock's left sole. Feeling his knuckles digging into the flesh of her foot Luffy sees that he's ruptured her skin letting a small trickle of blood to leak out. The powerful piercing sensation doesn't go ignored as its strong enough that Hancock screams in pain:
"LUFFY STOP!!!"
Dumbfounded and confused Luffy stops his actions and what lies before him is the current state of the pirate empress' feet. No longer do they look perfect like the other parts of her body as they are filled with red and purple sore spots all over the heels, instep, ball and the underside of the toes. To add salt to the injury Boa Hancock's left sole has a bit of blood pouring out of it, no doubt the end result of Luffy piercing her with his knuckle.
The Strawhat broke his rhythm and eyed Hancock with confusion, “Whatcha need?”
Hancock was a tad angry, “You dope! You ended up hurting me!!” If anything set Hancock into a rage it was pain, and even Luffy was no exception to that.
The Captain had a blank expression, “Oh…sorry!” His apology was sincere enough….but it didn’t help that Luffy passed out right afterwards, awakening an instant later in a weird fashion. He proceeded to grin foolishly, "So....forgive me?
Hancock sighed, "Well....
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