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Rated: E · Interactive · Action/Adventure · #2141885

You shrink near girls. (300 Word Minimum.)

This choice: Rem believed you. Whew!  •  Go Back...
Chapter #24

A Maid Outfit was not Maid for Tiny Passengers

    by: Sammy Author IconMail Icon
As you sat in wait for Rem's final judgment, you were also bracing yourself in case she doesn't believe you. Lots of possible ways the beautiful maid could end you at this size flash through your head. Unbeknownst to you, this actually worked in your favour.

Rem was still uncertain of whether she trusted your words, while her scrutinizing gaze washed over you, she settled on staring you dead in the eyes. Even if your words and actions weren't trustable, the look of fear in your eyes were of someone honestly afraid to die. If you were one of them, if you truly were pretending to be scared you were doing an amazing job at it. She thinks to herself that you were lucky that you were currying her trust early, if you were to stay here for, I don't know four days, and she had continued to distrust you, you would probably have had no chance to convince her.

Eventually Rem's eyes softened, seeing this you immediately figure she'd decided to trust you, but try not to react in a way that would cause her to regain her distrust. While thinking about how you should carry yourself, Rem speaks up:

"I have decided to believe in your story for now. If any of your actions henceforth sway from your story I shall not hesitate in ending your life, understand?" You nod vigorously and thank her for believing you. Though thinking about it, thanking her for something like that is a bit weird, but you could care less, you're not going to die!!! For now, that is.

You decide to quickly amend the mistake you made on your first loop, and ask her for her name before you accidently say it later.

"My name is Rem, maid of Roswaal L. Mathers." She answers your question curtly, returning to how she'd act when she's around a guest. She figures she shouldn't leave you alone as of now, but she also has work she needs to complete. She decides to pitch the question to you, a test you might say. You're not one of them, though that is still up to debate, but with Roswaal out to meet with Garfiel, there are only the female patrons of the mansion around. She needs to judge your character to see if she can trust you with the others, especially around Ms. Emilia and her sister.

"I have more work that I need to do for the day, and since I can't leave you here or alone, and since I also don't have any pockets I'll have to carry you on my body somewhere. I'll leave the choice to you."

Breasts. You want to go in them, you really do. You keep yourself from looking but from the show you know that hers are even bigger than her sister's. You also know, that this is a test and you can't say that that's where you want to go. A pity. You decide to muse aloud, as if the thought never even crossed your mind.

"Well, you can't keep me in your hands since you'll need those to work, you can't put me in your shoes since there's a high chance I would die and I'd also prefer just not to go down there. There's also your hair! You could maybe keep me on your head and I'd sit and watch you work. There is also..." Your eyes trail over to her lips, before you look away and blush slightly. "You could also carry me in your mouth, although it might be a hassle for you, it could probably be the safest place for me, as long as you stay conscious not to swallow me."

Rem being the way she is, would never accidently swallow you she's very diligent when she needs to be. She thinks to herself, and decides you pass, although she did see your bashful glance at her lips, you didn't attempt to perv on her, even if you may have thought you wanted to. Her thoughts get cut off as you continue.

"So either works I would say, I'll leave the choice up to you since you're the one in charge Rem". Another point, you left the choice in her hands, you think you answered pretty well, all things considered. Rem is left in thought again, this time you have the chance to relax on her hand not having to fear the chance of dying to her.

Wordlessly she puts you on top of her head. You feel a little funny as you're put her hair, your tiny form tickles her scalp, but this isn't a bad spot. She could definitely work with you up here, though the tickling may get annoying. Then, still wordlessly she picks you up again and brings you to her lips. She opens her mouth and lets you look inside for a few seconds, knowing suddenly shoving you inside may cause you to struggle, and she'd rather avoid accidentally swallowing you. She slowly rests you on her tongue and closes her mouth. You feel a bit funny on her tongue, and honestly don't taste too bad. She swirls you around a bit, licking you all over, and resting you in the space under her tongue too, she talks a little to test out if she can. Afterwards she pulls you out, you're coated in her saliva and she can't help but find that a little funny, but so as to not be unprofessional, she holds back her laughter.

Things for you went a bit rougher.

It started simple, she just laid you on top of her head. You assume she's trying out both possibilities before making her decision, how. Her hair was silky smooth, and you can't help but roll around a bit, being up here is a lot better than you expected when you initially suggested it. It's not too difficult to manage, and even if it does knot you, you're an expert at undoing knots.

Your time appreciating her luscious hair is cut short as her hand grabs you again, honestly knowing where you're going you don't know how you feel. You only gave her an option to make it feel more like it's her choice.

In a second you were face to face with her lips. You mentally prepare yourself as she slowly open her lips, revealing the chasm you're going to bunking with for a while. She holds you in front of her mouth for what feels like an eternity to you, but honestly you're thankful, your fear slowly fades as you're time and time again seeing how dutiful this maid is. Eventually you start heading towards her tongue, and when you make contact you immediately get soaked with her saliva. The inside of her maw was hot, humid, and damp, but it wasn't bad. You rest on her tongue for a few seconds, some drool dropping on you on you from atop her palate.

That's when things get rough, you start to get thrown around by the massive appendage. You get pushed against her cheeks, and get held to roof of her mouth, the whole time being licked all over. Honestly, as weird as the constant application of her saliva onto you was, you weren't entirely against it, it was just the motion sickness caused by her playing around with you that was the problem. She kept going for what felt like a few minutes until she stopped and you land in a pool of her drool underneath her tongue.

Being able to just be at rest after that was very much needed. That is until she decided to speak. It wasn't terrible, but due to your close proximity to her vocal chords the sound of her voice absolutely overwhelmed your hearing since you weren't expecting it. You'll have to be more mindful of that possibility from now on.

Not long after she pulls you out, a trail of saliva sticking to you, almost as if her mouth was sad to see you go. Rem looks down at you with the same indifferent expression as always, as she wipes you with her handkerchief before allowing you to rest in your palm once more.

Although she was basically decided on what she wanted to do, she asked if you had any input. So you tell her that she was licking you too hard and if she could be a bit more mindful of that. Also, to maybe warn you somehow if she was going to speak. Finally you decide to compliment how nice her hair is, hopefully getting some brownie points with the untrusting maid. In the end, that's all the input you had as you sit in wait for her decision.

Rem keeps in mind what you said, since she hasn't experienced it for herself, she should probably trust you when you say she was licking too hard. After she was finished with that thought, she provides you with her answer on where she was going to keep you.
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