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Chapter #23

Ariel's mother

    by: Silver Dragon Author IconMail Icon
You hear a series of gurgling sounds ringing in your ears, you feel your body as light as a feather, you feel something holding you suspended in mid-air, you are not touching the ground, but not even the ceiling.

You open your eyes, hoping to change your dream and return to dreaming of something more "attractive". You realize that you are not in a dream. You are in the sea and you are floating. Yet, it feels like you're breathing air. Check your legs and neck. No, you are not a fish and you don't have gills. Nobody subjected you to some strange experiment. Could it be a gift? No, you would have noticed before.

In the distance you hear a sound approaching: something or someone is coming towards you. Whatever it is, it must be gigantic. You hope it's a whale and not a great white shark.

Your fears dissipate, making room for new ones, as you see the figure that was swimming. She is a red-haired woman with a seashell bra, but she has a fishtail instead of legs. But she is gigantic, or perhaps you have shrunk.

“You finally woke up. I borrowed my husband's trident to help you breathe underwater, you were left unconscious on the surface, the current dragged you underwater and you were drowning. Not all humans are lucky enough to stay afloat without giving themselves a little push.”

You don't listen to her, you just stare at her. “Ariel?”

“How do you know my daughter's name?”

“Daughter, are you Queen Athena?”

“I asked a question first.”

“I…” You think of an answer, remember the beginning of the third film, when Athena was captured by those humans. It must be an event that has yet to happen. “I had observed you and your daughters playing near a rocky shore.”

“I understand, it is normal that some human beings are reluctant to get close to us and prefer to stay and watch.”

“Yes, I have seen what the king can do with the trident.”

“My husband doesn't hate humans.”

"At the moment." You think without speaking.

Ok, now I have to go sing goodnight to my daughters, do you want to come with me?

“Only if you promise to hide me. I don't like being seen like this."

Athena hides you in her hair, above her crown, you are perfectly camouflaged.

She swims to her daughters room while you hold her hair. When she arrives you discover that the princesses…
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