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Can you survive being shrunk in your in-laws house?

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Chapter #10

Thinks your still more crap

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You thought for sure he would notice you now , as he was bringing his hand closer to his face. He just started at for you a second and brought his other hand with the toilet paper closer to you.

You soon realized that no matter what he still didn’t see you as person, just an object stuck to his finger.
You see the paper slowly raise above you and then land in you. You try to move around on his finger so you can get off before you get caught in it. You managed to free arms and leg thanks to him washing you with the water, but your back was still stuck to his finger. You grab tightly to the paper on top of you and pull with all your strength to be set free. It’s no use, you can’t yourself free, but that’s when it hits you. “If I can’t get myself free, maybe her dad can when he pulls the paper up.” You think yo yourself.

Her dad pinches the toilet paper on his finger around your body. He squeezed tightly, in hopes to get whatever was on his finger off. He pulls it up off his finger and managed to pull you free. You hang on tight to the paper and hope he opens it ip to look at you. He looks back down at his finger to make sure he got whatever it was off. Confirming that he did he looks back at the paper in his other hand.

He thinks for a second and you feel him moving. You thought this is it, after all this I’m about i be saved. However that was not about to happen. You hear a loud opening underneath you, and feel yourself plummeting at a fast pace. Her dad decided that his finger was clean so he could open the toilet and throw the paper away. He gave it a nice toss and you landed partially in the water and the other part on his mountain of shit.

The smell hit you as soon as you crashed landed in the toilet. You tried to fight your was back out the paper before you were flushed away. You mad it out but when you got out everything was dark except for a shred of light. You look up to see for one more time, her dads big ass and dick and his huge hole right above you. He sat down one more time to let some more gas out. He blasted you with the full force of anything that was left in him. He stood back up and looked one last time at his masterpiece.

You looked back up at him and accepted your fate. You watched as he laughed and the reached for the lever. You see the rising all around you, spinning you and everything else in the toilet into circles and then with one last breath, you close your eyes and say goodbye before you are flushed down the drain.

Her dad closes the lid and goes about his dad. Never knowing that his son in-law get to spend his last day with him. Nice and closely.

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