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 | Where the Sea meets The Desert  [E] why its important to keep moving  |
| (4.0)| Greetings, Njoki Kamau! This isn't bad for your first piece on here. I like the way you give hope to those who are living on this 'border' between the sea and the desert, as well how you brought Nature into this. Nature does play a big role in not just this location, but all over the world. But your point about not stopping and to keep moving is valid. Not just literally, but figuratively too. Even when we're down on our luck in life, we need to keep moving because there is hope ahead. Good job, Njoki, but I did spot a few tiny typos: 'They are in owe' (awe) 'Do not look back. Or go back to the broader' (border) 'they will come again and maybe a gain' (again) 'Do not by any chance go back to the boarder' (border) Kee ponw ritin gon, my friend, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here! PS-You might want to get your bioblock (biography) set up so we can know a little something more about you (hobbies, favorite books/authors, location, etc.), but that's up to you, of course. PSS-And since you’re new here, perhaps you’d like to check out "Noticing Newbies" and introduce yourself to the rest of the community if you haven’t already.
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