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JULY 2022 challenge!"  

I got to read this
it's not about bliss
random review

you hit, not miss
frosty words don't kiss
form - new

he went down the abyss
fire went out with a hiss
boo hoo.

Will you look at that? You had me so piqued I had to try the form myself! I know I got the syllable counts all wrong, though.

I LOVE the title. It has a beautiful feel to it. The brief description and genres work, too. Yes, you did tell the story within the constraints of the form you chose. I like the formatting (no capital letters).

I appreciate the links given and the explanation.

The best thing about it was that (like I said) it made me want to try one for myself.

Lai On,
Sonali

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