I really enjoyed the moral of the story in this tale. You did a great job of presenting a situation and resolving it with a lesson for others in a short amount of space. It was a quick, easy, and informative read. Nice work!

There were quite a few technical errors in the piece, including missed spaces, omitted quotation marks (either at the beginning or end of a piece of dialogue), and no paragraph breaks, which made the experience of reading it a little slower and more tedious than it otherwise would have been. I'd recommend a quick proofread and polish to smooth things out a bit.

Overall, this was a very enjoyable story. Well done!