Hi Jannatnewaz

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Positives

I thought this was a well-presented and thoughtful take on the role of government in our lives. I particularly like that you broke up some of the bullet points into smaller parts in the subsequent paragraphs to really make your point completely.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I think you did a really good job with this piece. Well done!


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