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Yvonne and the Magical Window Open in new Window. [E]
Needing to be seen Yvonne finds her special place. Writer's Cramp Winner!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Ah, a magical window. Let's gaze into the life of a young girl, with five older siblings. Often overlooked in the crowd of noise, she tries to find something to do. In the basement of the house was a magic window, one that teleported her to a world full of magic and wonder. What shall happen to her? Read to find out.

Characters
Characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Good job winning the Writer's Cramp.

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