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 Picking fruit Open in new Window. [13+]
On a distant planet, the convicts pick fruit under the hateful stare of sun and overseer
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Two men, sentenced for unspecified crimes, find themselves picking fruit from a moving train. The fruit is both rather valuable, and is covered in very sharp thorns that tend to prick the hands of would-be pickers. However, it seems that someone has showed up to cause a jail break of sorts. What will happen? Well, read to find out.

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Characters look interesting.

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Assuming that futuristic slang is involved, I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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