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 Totally Tall Tales  Open in new Window. [13+]
Experimenting with telling some action oriented and funny stories.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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A teacher is spending her day listening to stories that her students are telling. One talks about their "alleged" great-grandfather, and what happened to them. Another talks about how their father survived a "zombie apocalypse". Eventually, the class is over, and now she can enjoy her day at a local bar, where things get interesting.

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Characters look intereasting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
Make sure to include a link to the next part of this - if there is a next part.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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