Hello ridinghhood-p.boutilier

Hi there. I found your poem in the Read and Review section.

My First Impression:

A crying out for a "mother" to care, to nurture, to do the things that only a mother can do. The crier's own mother for whatever reason is unable to fulfil that need.

My Favorite Part:

It reminds me of King David's own cries to God; asking for help and guidance that only He could give. Everyone deserves to be held and nurtured by a mother figure.

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:

I am glad that I got to read this poem/cry. Thank you for sharing.