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Macy's Birthday Surprise Open in new Window. [E]
Macy hopes she gets the Birthday present that she wants most.
by Morticia Wednesday Megan Rose Author Icon
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Greetings, Megan!

I love this cozy story. The details are so sweet, and the ending is just perfect. It's so comforting to read about a little girl whose father came back for her. This reads like a movie, with lots of emotion and great visuals. Just when we think her wish isn't coming true, the adorable little puppy shows up, with Daddy right behind it. The mother is loving and concerned, knowing the improbability of the wish being fulfilled. She wants her daughter to be happy. Macy has faith in the stars, but she starts questioning as it gets later. Tears and laughter and hugs; a charming, heartwarming story.

Talking of wishing on stars, here's a nice wistful little song from OneRepublic... "I don't believe in the stars anymore/ they never gave me what I wished for..." It's sad but hopeful.
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Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *WingL**Heartv**WingR*


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