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Just a Pinch Open in new Window. [E]
Save the lobsters!
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I popped into your port for an anniversary review and found some lobster.

This interesting poem has eight couplets that rythme. Being a lobstah girl myself, I thought I'd see what the menu offered.

Our narrator was concerned that the cod(fish) was going to eat all the tasty lobster and so cast a spell for that to stop. I was very surprised to learn, after doing some research, that cod are a natural predator to lobster. Ultimately, our story has a happy ending with our narrator savoring a tasty claw.

This was a highly entertaining poem, especially with its whimsical rythmes and storytelling.

My only suggestion would be to consistently punctuate the poem, as it would help establish a beat when read out loud.

If you enjoy a tasty buttered lobster this one's for you!

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