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Journeys of Clay Open in new Window. [E]
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Greetings, Fyn!

I discovered this cool poem by using the Random Read and Review button.

I love the quaint, contemplative way this is written, in conversational free verse that flows smoothly and communicates clearly. You describe the stone soldiers and muse upon their origins. Are they stand ins for real people, sent to guard the king from strange forces beyond? We're glad they aren't humans who were "added" to the tomb, as in some cases *Shock2*

The images of the king using these statues as chess pieces or those little plastic figures that the boys play with is ingenious. I can just see this playing out somewhere in the underworld: he wanted to bring his toys with him *Laugh*

Don't forget to add two more relevant genres to the item: I would recommend Philosophy and Arts. That way, people will find it when browsing. I'm glad I found this - it's well written and thought-provoking.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *WingL**Heartv**WingR*


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