\"Writing.Com
*Magnify*
SPONSORED ITEMS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4840076
Review #4840076
Viewing a review of:
 A Ruler Of Jade Open in new Window. [E]
Feb. 15 prompt for the Chinese New Year Edition
by 💙 Carly: Joan Watson Author Icon
Credit this reviewer
#4840076
Review of A Ruler Of Jade  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Access:  Public | Hide Review (?)
Greetings, Carly!

I discovered this fun poem by using the Random Read and Review button.

It presents a fanciful look at a Chinese god figure, maintaining the parameters of the contest and giving us a fresh perspective without poking fun at what seems so funny to have actually been believed in at some point. I like the subtle rhyme scheme that doesn't interfere with the flow.

I noticed you haven't picked three relevant genres for it. Those always help people discover items when browsing. I would suggest Cultural, History and Mythology as being quite suitable. Contest Entry is no longer relevant.

Well written, with a tone matching the subject and simple yet picturesque language. I enjoyed reading it.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *WingL**Heartv**WingR*


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" Open in new Window..
   *NoteR* You have not yet responded to this review. Ignore
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4840076