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 NaNo 2017 Definition list Open in new Window. [13+]
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Greetings,

I found this with the Random Read and Review button. A bit of a surprise, as it's super brief and simple: a vocabulary list for a novel project from eight years ago. I hope you were able to successfully complete this one - it sounds exciting, judging by the words. A drunk driver, fetal alcohol syndrome, and PTSD makes for a great crime drama with heart wrenching family elements. You've set my mind whirling with just a handful of everyday terms *Delight*

Improvement? Well, it's a list of words... I can't suggest much except perhaps to add a postscript telling us whether you finished the story and perhaps linking to it if it's in your portfolio. Also, if you don't mind, I'll advertise my own take on drunk driving, broken families and finding peace: "Destroyed" Open in new Window. It's under 2k words and pretty emotional, depending on your worldview.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *WingL**Heartv**WingR*


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