This was a commendable poem. While I am not typically inclined to read poetry, I am capable of recognising quality in poetic work. It possesses a profound meaning, and I believe that the world would have been better off if humans had not settled here (although this does not imply that I do not wish to be here).
I would give you Keep writing, and I wish you luck.

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