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The Flower and the Bee Open in new Window. [E]
A free verse poetry on eternal love.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.


*Reading* THE POEM

A poem about a flower that longs to be pollinated.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I loved the story the poem told. It had it's ups and down, but did a great job portraying the circle of life and it left the reader feeling uplifted.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is free verse poem with 40 lines.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "Grief will heal in time, Everyone was kind," This is a simple statement, but it packs an emotional punch and reminds us just how the circle of life touches our lives.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening starts off with the reader hoping the flower will find happiness and that keeps the reader reading. *Smile* The title is a good, reflective fit for the poem. Poignant and full of heart.

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