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An author struggles to find the elixir that puts life in her prose |
Where Is The Literary Ambrosia? By Erlyn Baya I hear the clatter of rainfall, the hypnotic lull of a tide. I taste the salty air on the beach, the heat from love's passionate touch. Inspiration swells in my chest. I see, feel, smell, taste and hear. So I rush to translate the mood in carefully selected words on page My manuscript does not seize his gut. I fail to tingle the follicles on his nape, or put goose bumps on his frigid arms. Again, I long for that elusive contract. My rewrite is done, I read it out loud. The sound still mechanical and stiff, no sparkle in the lack-luster prose, falling short of literary ambrosia. Where is the mood ... the elixir that puts the soul in a manuscript? Where's the spirit that brings a tale to life, that impetus born within my muse? I hear the eerie rumble of thunder over a cold, laden sky, and I shudder, feeling the mood revives inside me. And so I begin yet again ...to write-- It was a dark and stormy night.... |