Freedom

Revelations in a morning meadow (Form: Tanka)

Freedom

iridescent green
flashes in the morning light
wings moving in flight
freedom never seemed so free
I feel their wind in my hair

Notes
An entry for week 9 of "Poetic Exploration"  [E] Exploring 50 poetic forms in 2011 Image: Hummingbird
Form: Tanka
Tanka is a classic form of Japanese poetry related to the haiku with five unrhymed lines of five, seven, five, seven, and seven syllables. (5, 7, 5, 7, 7)

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Ken