Portfolio: emby

I was born in 88, so do the math! I work as a teller, hopefully soon a senior or head teller, at a bank and part time at Hollywood Video as a shift leader. What else is there? I want to write. But I understand that my writing is... well maybe average... and I would really like some pointers on how to make it.... well above average haha. So please when reviewing... be mean... be crude... and give me some pointers on how you think I can improve. Thanks! Emby