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I've added a new item to my portfolio:
 Captive of the Stars  (E)
A young girl realizes what she has, and it is something special.

I wanted to see what others thought of this snip bit i wrote a while ago in a creative writing class. Do you think it would make a good chapter book, of should i focus on it being a short story? Opinions are highly requested so please let me know!

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