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Cyrral Stallwarth was born the unexpected, unwanted bastard son to fifteen year old Priscilla Stallwarth who attempts to murder her newly born son then dispose of his body before her religious zealot father learns she is impure; the start of Cyrral's life becomes his first near death experience igniting a primal instinct to survive, fight, dominate, kill with ferocity so intense it blurs the boundary between man and beast..
My one line logline..Does it sell?
Sounds good to me. *Smile* I like the details about the story, but it's too bad it has to be just one line. I think it would read better by using a couple of sentences. Just my two gps worth. *Wink*
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