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Review of Getting Free  
Review by Addi Jennings
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Hello, this was a very good story, except i felt like it was unfinished. I feel like there could be way more than just her getting there and being able to escape that easily. Maybe that's the way its supposed to be, it's like a cliff hanger but I still think that you could add way more detail. But i really like the story and where it's going. Keep up the good work !!
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