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Review of Brooklyn's Life  
Review by Tiki Tobi
Rated: E | (3.5)
Wow... this was pretty deep in my opinion. If this is actually a true story, then please send my regards to Brooklyn if you are able to contact her. After reading this, I had a feeling, kinda like wanting more. If you have any other stories like this, or a continuation of this one, I would be happy to read it. I guess, reading this made me thirsty? Anyways, the only feedback I can give is to work on sentence structure, or "Grammar" (Ex: Periods, commas, transition words). Otherwise, well done!
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Review by Tiki Tobi
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was a really good story, I just loved how it was written :) Keep up the good work!
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Review by Tiki Tobi
Rated: E | (4.5)
Aww, this was really sweet, and sad.
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