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Review by Anne Arthur
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,
I just wrote a review, pushed the wrong button, and -swoosh- everything had disappeared. Let me try again, although rewriting a review is painful.

Great imagination, and I find this a very creative story. The tale of a grain of sand traveling through our world is wonderful. I was suffering with the grain when trapped 'in a sea of pus' (hilarious) and so relieved to witness its survival through the ordeal.
Equally, the idea of ancestry and family is just heartwarming and heartwrenching all the same. You take the reader captive and your description of the grain's travels is very vivid and real.

I love your piece.
More of this, please.
Anne Arthur
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Review by Anne Arthur
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Thanks. Great advice about the 'how to', and very pertinent.
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Review by Anne Arthur
Rated: E | (4.5)
True and real pain seeping through your writing.

I am worried about you. If your pain persists, please call a suicide help line urgently. Make sure to talk to someone. Please don't try to manage your pain alone.

Wishing you the very best, you will overcome. Even if difficult, you will overcome.
Anne
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Review by Anne Arthur
Rated: E | (4.5)
Your writing got my attention, I held my breath, anticipating what I think should come...and then it's something totally different.
Great piece. Keep writing.
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