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322 Public Reviews Given
Review Style
I would like to review mystery, documentary, and comday. However, I am open to poetry as well.
I'm good at...
I am good at documentaries, and I am very patient with the beginners. I do understand that learing a new skill is not easy.
Favorite Genres
My favorite geners are documentaries and literatures
Public Reviews
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Review by Zheila
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi Jones;

My name is Zheila. I had some free time and decided to read a short story. Your's was the one. However, I must say the story of Bambie is a very sad one. I read it when I was six years old and I still get very sad for Bambi getting killed by some hunter. I still carry when I read or watch the movie. I would like to suggest to make your story a little with the happy-ending. Otherwise I did enjoy Love on a Nice Day.


Sincerely,


Zheila
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Review of The Birthday Girl  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
My dear Frisco;

I read your sotry and enjoyed it very much. I would like tot make a suggestion. Please do add a little more what happend to Annie? Why is she not there with her family anymore. I would like to give your 200 of my Gift Points to maek your day a little brither.


Sincerely,


Zheila
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Review of Second Chance  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Bobbi
My name is Zheila. I had a chance to read your story. It was very emotional. I wish everyone gets a chance to fell a true love, like your sotry. I liked it very much and I give you 200 of my Gift Points. Please keep writing. Have a nice day.

Sincerely,


Zheila



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Review of Weathered Wings  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
My dear Okami ;

This is Zheila. I normally do not read Sci-Fi. But your story was very enjoyalbe and I read them fron start to finish. Please keep up the good work. I am giving you 300 of my Gift Point. Enjoy it.


With regards,


Zheila
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Review of Weathered Wings  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Well down my dear.
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Review of Weathered Wings  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi Okami;

i just finised reading chapter five. It was very well written. I am looking forward to read chapter six soon. Keep up the good work.
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Review of Weathered Wings  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi Hikari;

I must write that your story makes me to turn the page. Keep up the good work.
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Review of Weathered Wings  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Helo Okami;

You did it again. I do hope one day you can publish it. I am sure interested people can not put it down.

Sincerely;


Zheila
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Review of Weathered Wings  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
My dear Okami;

I did enjoy your story so much that I am going to read chapter 3 right away. Good work.
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Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Tom,

I did finish reading chapter 3. It was very well written. I guess soon after publishing your book. People will ask for your autograph and will ask you to sign the book for them. I make sure to be right in front to beat the crowd ( I hope this is the correct way of using the phrase). I am giving you 400 gift point and the rating is 5.0. I am hoping this would make your week-end a little more pleasant. Well, this is waht I think about your work. Have a wonderful week-end now.

Sincerely,


Zheila
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Review of The Fun House  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Tom;

This is Zheila. This is was exciting like a good mystery should be. It remiands me of when my mother and I watch mystery movies. It frighten her, but still she wants to know what is going to happen next. I gave you 300 points of my Gift Points for a job well done. Please drop me an E-mail, if you would, when you have new story. I love to read it.


Sincerely,


Zheila
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Review by Zheila
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
My dear Okami

This is Zheila (174) again. what I say. you make me read more. Now I have to come back for your next chapter. I just finished a book by the name of Slave Species of god. The writer is Michel Tellinger. If you have not read it, I just you do. I will help you with your next story. Have a great day.
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Review by Zheila
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi Okami;

You did it agian; I read 3 chaptersof your Weatherd Wings and enjoyed it very much. You hooked me. Now I ave to know what is going to happen on the next chapter. Keep up the good work.

With Best Wishes'

Zheila 174
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Review of Trick or Tweet  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Tom;

You did it again. I did enjoy reading your story. I liked it so much that I gave some300 points of my Gift Points. In fact, I was working on a documentary about Decmber 21,2012. I would like to invite you to read it. Its title is Doomsday 2012 is near. It is under the name of Zheila 174.
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Review by Zheila
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi Hikari;

This is Zhela again. I had a free time; The best time to read your chapter 2 "Weathered Wings." Have you ever heard about Michael Tellinger. He has a theory about extraterrestrials. Here is the link . I am sure you will like it. Well done on chpater 2

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V3t_akWrz58
This site should give you some ideas for others storis about ET and Humans. Love your work.
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Review of Weathered Wings  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello Dear Okami (17)

My name is Zheila; I was looking for something interesting to read. Your story seemed very interesting. I read the first chapter and giave you 5.0 . I am planning all the 11 chapters and shall give more points. Good job.
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Review of The Sound  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I liked the style of your writing so much that I decided to come back and give you a review as well as some of my points. Keep up the good wrok please.
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