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322 Public Reviews Given
322 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
I would like to review mystery, documentary, and comday. However, I am open to poetry as well.
I'm good at...
I am good at documentaries, and I am very patient with the beginners. I do understand that learing a new skill is not easy.
Favorite Genres
My favorite geners are documentaries and literatures
Public Reviews
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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Inkwell;

I read your intro to "The Journey To The Lost World- intro". You have started your story with a nice title. And makes one to read more. I believe that you definitely need to expand the story. Good work. I do hope to read the rest it soon. Please keep up the good work.


Sincerely,


Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Socalscribe;

I read your story of " The Wayward Cataphiles." Although I like to read a lot, but I have never heard of "catacombs of Paris." This is something I learnt from your story. Frankly I do not believe in faeries and pixies. But I also did not think Jinns exist either. But when I did search on line Google showed too many books about Jinns. There are stories in Bible and Islam about Jinns.So your story about bad and good faeries and pixies might be true. All you need to do it is to prove it. It was very well written and I liked it very much. Good job.


Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of College Story  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello Library_guy ;

The title of your story took me back to my collage days. How many hours did I spent in the College store to look for the required materials. I start reading your story and liked it very much. Especially when you saved the turtle. There are so many cruelty against poor animals these days. I am hoping that may be your readers become aware that animals have emotions and the right to live as we do and stop hurting and passing over their little bodies in the middle of the road. Please keep up the good work.


Sincerely,

Zheila, a member of writing.com
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Review of Garden Paradise  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Dobie mom;
I read your story for the following reasons:
1) I was looking for a title to grab my attention. Yours was the one.
2) The story was in a good length.
3) Very original.
4) very spooky.
5) Very well written.

Please keep up the good work and keep writing. You do have future in writing.

Sincerely,

Zheila , a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi Kia

I read your short story "Boys and Girls Can't be Friends". You have touched a very important fact of life, which is emotions. Sometimes friendships do not turn out to be what we have hoped for. You did a good job on it. A job well done. Keep up the good work.


Sincerely,

Zheila a member of writing.com
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Review of Pandemonium  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi Naraxes;

your story "Pandemonium" is a very deep line between reality and imaginery world. From the dawn os the story the force of evils and goods have battled to win the souls of humans. The Demons, Nephilims, and Jinnis are interwoven in eastern cultures , which you have demonstrated masterfully. A job well done. I enjoyed reading your story. have a great day.

Sincerely,

Zheila a member of writing.com
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Review of Uppity  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Mikema 63;

Your rough draft is well written. I started reading it thinking I am going to put it away in a minute. But I did like it so much that I had to finish. You do have a future in writing if you dontinue practicing. I am looking forward to reading the whole story.


Sincerely,


Zheila amember of writing.com
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Review of The Mission  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello Sapphire,

What made me read your story was the title. It is very eye-catching title. Second the story has a lot of descriptive actions. There is no dull moment in your story. It has lot's of suspense in the story. All toghether it was a job well done. Please continue writing. You are a very good writer. Have a great day.


Sincerely,

Zheila, a memberof writing.com
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Review of Missmatch  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Shoegirl;

I thought it is a story. But It trun out to be a poem. The thing that caught my attention was the title. It sound very funny, which It really trun out to be the story of my life. I used to loose a lot of socks until I bought one of those laundry net for socks and underwwear. Now no laundary thief can creep into my laundry. I enjoyed your very funny poem and read it to my mom. She also liked it very much and laughed her heart out. Please do keep on writing. You are good. Have a great day.

Sincerely,

Zheila
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Review of Flying Fool  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Wild bill,

My name is Zheila and I am a member of writing.com. I read your story of "Flying Fool" as an adult and not a 16 years it was very enjoyable to me. I am sure the 16 years will have more fun with your story. Well done on writing such a delightful piece. I hope to read a nice piece from you soon. Keep up the good work.


Sincerely,


Zheila
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Review of The Poet's Pain  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi ByvikramAdith;

your poem "Poets' Pain" has only one word to add. Simply perfect. I enjoyed reading it very much.


Sincerely,


Zheila
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Review of Dollar Bill  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Dragon Keeper;

I would like to manke a few suggestion if I may.
1) the title of your article was nicley chosen; it grabs the readers attention.
2) You started the plot very nicley, but in the middle you lost your audience.
3) At the end the reader does not get any conclusion.
4) I would like you to go back and try to make your character to do something. He may decide to go on line and find out that the web site belongs to some sort of secret society, or it is a new business and wants to attract customers. You choose what you would like to do.
5) All togehter I liked the story very much. I do hope that I have not offended your writing in any which way.
6) We are all here to learn from each other.

With best ot luck,


Sincerely,


Zheila
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Review of The Seeing Stone  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Hi Sir Various;

I had a chance to read your "The Seeing Stone". I liked your writting style. However, I did not like too much blood shade escpeially when your readers are at younger age. they see enough blood shede on TV. All together I enjoyed reading your story. I am sorry if I were a little bit harsh, but I wanted to be honest with you . You and I are here to learn. Best of luck for future.


Sincerely,

Zheil
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Review of Deserted island  
Review by Zheila
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Dear Maryann;

Deserted Island was one of the most captivating short story I have read since my membership. I loved the picture of the waterfall that you on the top of the page. Your writing made me to imagine the Island and care free life withouth the head of modern cvilization. The story grabs the readers attention so much that one wants to read more. I had a great time reading it. I was sorry that it ended. I am looking forward to read other stories by you. Have a great day.


Sincerely,

Zheila
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Review by Zheila
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hello Summer Lee'

I started reading your well written but sad story of " If The Take Me." And I could not put it down. I loved it very much. History has proven again and again that it is impossible to suppress people, but never has worked. Too many unnessary loose of life and at the end the brutal reime looses and people will triumph. Let's hope that humanity shall see better future. Well done my dear.


Sincerely,

Zheial a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello Patriccia;

My nam eis Zheila a novice in the world of writing. I read your the first chapter of your "Out of Gry". I wanted to write a few encouraging words. But when I read your background, it remained me of when my brother was a student in Paris. He talked to a person and at the end he said to other party I would like to congratulate you; you speck French fluently. The other party replied thank you that is becuse I am French. That bring me to the this subject of your writing. After reading your background I see you are a professional writer. However, an accalimed person such as yourslef would like to hear how wonderful you write. I did enjoy reading your work. and I am looking forward to read the rest of your novel. I know it is too much to hope for, but I do hope one day I can write as well as you do.

Sincerely,

Zheila a member of writing.com
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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello E. Slate;

My name is Zheila, one of the member of writing.com. I always was fascinated by sapce exploration. I believe that NASA does not tell the whole story. NASA said that nothing will happen on Decmber 21,2012. But something actually did happen. On the Coasttocoastam. Geroge Noory on December 21,2012 at 1 Am Decmber 22 2012 said tha we did surivie, but whay? Richard C Hoagland former NASA museum curator said that with the help of HAARP the Solare Flare that suppose to hit and destory the earth was bounced back to sapce. Hoagland said that he later would talk about more in details. It is very possible that there was and still is life of alien form that NASA does not want us to know. When the miltary complex is keeping the truth about UFO a secret for the past 50 years. I do not think that NASA part of Defense would tell the truth of life in Mars or any other part of universe. I did like your piece very much. Well done.
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Review of Blue the Red Dog  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Imagine;

this is Zheila. I had a chance to read your "Blue The Red Dog." It is a beautiful story. The sort that a person expects from Disney. It is very chaming, I enjoyed it tremendously. It will be an honor to read your future works.I like it so much that I am giving you 300 of my gift points. I do hope you enjoy it.


Sincerely,


Zheila
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Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi there Cleary;

I read your "Accent Speak Lounder Than Words". I thought how funny it is that when we do not have something we want it more. You think that Australian accent is hot. Well, the females of other countires think that American men with their accent are dream come true. Your sotry was very interesting and remainded me of my teenage years. I do hope that you and your friends always reamin young at heart. But remember after you catch that prince charming the story changes. Men are Men all over the world. The accent might be different but the attitude remains the smae.Have a great day.


Sincerely,


Zheila
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Review of Lucky At Cards  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hi there Tomvee

My name is Zheila. I am also a member. Your story of all west was very interesting. In the century that most kids, and adults are palying with computer, you brought the old west back. "Lucky At Cards" shows how really life was back a century back. Something that we longer see it. Well done my friend. Please keep writing.


Sincerely,


Zheila
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Review of Living Simply  
Review by Zheila
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello Missy;

I read your story. So sorry that the relationship you were in was abusive one. However, I am glad that you were able to pull yourself outside of it. Many people still in that kind of relationship and do not know when to end it. You had courage and that is good. Time is going to take of your wounds and hopefully you shall be ready for a new meaningful relationship with the one that is for you. Have a great day.


Sincerely,


Jila
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Review of Desolate  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi there dear Elemenopy,

I read your story. The world is indded changing fast. It would a time soon that no one shall remember what the world with all natural beauty really was? People have changed for the worse and all the rules of the games have changed too. I fell like we humans shall bring the death ray upon us because we never learn from the past and the future for the humanity looks lost. You have written it beautifully. Well done.

Sincerely,

Zheila
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Review by Zheila
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
My name is Zheila . I was looking to read something new but different. The name of your book caught my attention. I must say that from the beginning your story was full of mystery and very well written. It made the reader to read and pounder what is going too happened next. It is very difficult to write action/adventure. Kyle writing is of course fun but needs imagination specially science fiction. I feel that you have it in you. Please do continue writing because my impression from your story is that is good enough to be made into a movie. I am not joking. I have seen many Hollywood movies that should not have been into movies any way. Your story has wonderful characters, you have not turned it into all muscle man movies, and you gave your players equal chance of expressing themselves. I am sure if you continue writing, your story for sure will be more intriguing. The Black Fire Lighthouse was so interesting that I was not able to put it down. I wanted to know what is going to happen to each of the players. There were times that I thought your characters will end up losing the battle but very cleverly you came up with new idea to save them from being boring. It does show that you did take your time and spend a lot of research to give your players life, which is really hard thing to do. I thought since I really liked your book drop you a note and let you know what a great job you are doing. I am looking forward to read your second book. Please do accept my best wishes for a bright future in writing. I would like to give you 300 of gift point to make your day happier.


Sincerely,


Zheila
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Review of A Wizard's Tale.  
Review by Zheila
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi Blushing Rose (7)

My name is Zheila. I had some times and decided to read your story. What I liked abou is that gives advice to the reader,that one never must loose hope. All one can do is hie, or her best. The magic is all time withing a person, but the person does not realize it. Once the person gets enough confidence that is capble of doing whatever it is that he wants to do, there is no stopping it. I did enjoy reading your story. It was time well spent. Please keep up the good work. Have a great week-end.


Sincerely, Zheila
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Review by Zheila
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi Jones;

My name is Zheila. I had some free time and decided to read a short story. Your's was the one. However, I must say the story of Bambie is a very sad one. I read it when I was six years old and I still get very sad for Bambi getting killed by some hunter. I still carry when I read or watch the movie. I would like to suggest to make your story a little with the happy-ending. Otherwise I did enjoy Love on a Nice Day.


Sincerely,


Zheila
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