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Rated: E | (4.0)
A lovely poem, with a good salutatory message. Quit while you're ahead!

I like it!
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Review of Secret Cave Swim  
Rated: ASR | (2.5)
This sent a vision to me almost like the graceful beings in the film Avatar. Very nicely done.
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Rated: ASR | (3.5)
Hi there,
Nice idea. But it gets a little confused about who is speaking at points. Might be worth putting a little direction as who is speaking each line.
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