|I have thoroughly enjoyed reading your fairy tale. It has been a learning experience as well. The characters are well defined, and the story line holds together well. The princesses are lovable. However, 2 other cahracters stood out for me. They are Fafni and Hermod. Every fairy taled needs a hero or two.
Three minor things that need attending:
Thor jumped out of his chariot and tackled one of the trolls. Pinning the beast to the) on ground with his hammer to its neck, Thor ordered, “Stay still, troll! There is no escape for you.”
Fenris?” (asked) said Loki, with a look of shock.
Sigyn looked on in horror as Silje collapsed onto the ground. Jumping up, Sigyn ran over to the princess.
“What did you do to Silje?” she cried
Why would Sigyn show any sympathy toward the princess. A note of explanation would be helpful to the reader.
The ending leads me to expect more adventure for the girl. I look forward to reading your work.