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Review by JackJack
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
You know I like how you have a different variety of options on this interactive story, But I don't really like how you haven't added more chapters onto any of these options. I have on the other hand added some chapters if you wanna read them. I don't know if you'll like them or not but I hope you do add onto one of these stories eventually. I would like to see how well you can tell a story.
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Review by JackJack
Rated: E | (5.0)
So far this story sounds good, I wouldn't mind reading more if you put more in it. I am curious if there is a reason for the sex division of the pups or if that is just part of the story. I really hope that you continue on with this story though because I would definietly read it afterwards.
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Review by JackJack
Rated: GC | (3.0)
I don't really know what to say about this story other than it slightly confused me at the beginning where I thought a fight was going to start out. Then reading a bit more into the story I find out its not a fight which I laughed a bit and I didn't really like how you didn't put names in for these two people because it really threw me off on who the main character was. Other than that I'll give your story a 7/10.
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Review by JackJack
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I really like this version of the story that your putting in. It catches my attention and I hope you add more on to it soon. But I don't know if you wanted somebody else to add on to the story or not, but so far the story is sounding pretty good. I like it.
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Review by JackJack
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I really like this story keep it up. Also I like how both Hamn8r and marson are both adding onto the story one after the other.
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Review by JackJack
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
This version of the story of Gwen filling up with gold is quite interesting and I kind of like it. Keep up the good work. Also I put in my version of Gwens Adventures if your interested in it. https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1808... Here is the link to it, I hope you enjoy it.
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