THIS IS AMAZING. Sure, I have a few things to follow, but I love it! I love how you sound so...British and cocky. And I mean that in the best way. It has a certain tone that says, You are an ignoramus, I must do something about your unfortunate existence so you no longer trouble me with such informality. And I think it is great.
I would....I would find a person without a tree for Christmas and get them a tree and decorate it for them and say, this is your Christmas present. If it were for a younger child, I would say it is from Santa and his helpers. If it were for someone religious I would say it's from their guardian angel. And if it were just a normal, no affiliation person, I would just put, From a Christmas Spirit. I can't have a real Christmas tree anyway, I am allergic to Pine trees. I would die. Anyway, great prompt. This is a really cool idea and when I read it I thought of my Great Grandma and how she has us put up this huge tree and decorate it before the family get together for Christmas. Good Job. Keep being fantastic.
Simple. Well Put. I was expecting this big thing that I had to search for a deeper meaning, but it turns out, it's a little thing where the meaning is right there in my face and makes me question my existance. AKA, is this about something like paper....or the human life. Good job. Love it.
This is really great. I really like the amount of description you put in, despite it being a more opinion piece. I didn't find any grammical errors and the flow is well developed. I would reconsider calling it an essay, due to the amount of emotion. Otherwise, fantastic. Keep writing.
I like the concept, but you really need to spell and grammar check. I caught a few things throughout the story. I would develop the feelings more, but I love the detail. If you end up writing another piece to this, I would love to read it.
I really love this. This sums up how I wish I could feel. I like how you just have a train of thought that is so deep and outspoken. I think my favorite part is the rewind and fast forward lines. They make me think of the fact, it doesn't have to be someone else asking you to do either, you can ask yourself but it never gets you anywhere. Really great job. I really enjoyed this. Keep writing.
I really loved this work! I am forever finding poems about feelings and hurt and pain but others, but this was about innocence. This was so eye opening. The only improvement is one you probably already know and that bugged you while writing this; some of the lines don't go to the same rhythm. But at the same time, it really doesn't matter because I think you're message is the best part. More people should write like this. Good job.
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