This poem is beautiful. The meaning, the story and the words behind it, remind me of my writing journey and that word "alone," following me all my life.
Your rhyming is wonderful and flowing. I know we have many writing styles and rhyming is making music in someone else's mind as they read, as I read your poem.
This strikes a cord in me today..."My mind that's empty with no thought." to know what the mind is capable of, is the one step in assuring that you no longer live in that "no thought" zone. I understand that zone well, for I have dwelt within it for 29 years, I'm sorry to say. But, believe in your mind, and your thoughts will once again be filled with new inspirations to build on.
Thank you for sharing your poetry with the world.
Have a great life journey :)
Keep smiling ;)
Giggles the Poet...aka Brenda