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91 Public Reviews Given
128 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
I try To comment on on style as well as content, I do point out grammar if it is really noticable, but do not focus heavily in that area. I review the material, but do not base it on my personal opinion. I may disagree with you but I will not rate based on it.
I'm good at...
giving thorough reviews, I always try to be helpful and point out anything that can help.
Favorite Genres
Mystery, Sci-fi, fantasy
Favorite Item Types
I don't have one
Least Favorite Item Types
Poetry
I will not review...
Poetry
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Review by Archivist
Rated: E | (4.0)
I've been thinking through this question to myself recently and have been looking at the different possible reasons for the existance of mankind and how they got here. Your Poll intrigued as it is a question I have been asking myself.

But onto the evaluation. This poll was made rather well since it gives a brief summary of what the different view points mean. You could put why you wanted to create this poll and what you plan on using it for if you wanted to improve it.
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Review by Archivist
Rated: 18+ | (1.5)
I've seen stories like this many times before. Many choices about who you could be but only a small amount of chapters with actual story line. A story like that just turns the reader off. If you want people to add quality chapters you'll need to have some already.
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Review of My Signature  
Review by Archivist
Rated: E | (4.0)
I really like the Signature. It gives a feeling of romance and loneliness at the same time. when I look at it I see a strong singular figure (the lighthouse) looking at the the sun as it starts its descent into the cold empty ocean. It's truly a beutiful pic
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Review by Archivist
Rated: 18+ | (1.0)
I'm sure that this story could become much better if you put some effort into creating the story

The first thing is that the story NEEDS to be checked for grammer, spelling, and punctuation. Not only was the story hard to read but it didn't seem to make much sense.

I'm sure that you could do much better.
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Review by Archivist
Rated: E | (4.5)
great story.It was very touching. I myself am a university student. I sometimes get homesick and miss myparents from time to time. this story made me imagine my parents after I had finally moved out and was living on my own. I truly felt touched after reading this story.
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Review of Dark City  
Review by Archivist
Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
Sounds like a great story idea. As long as it continues to grow it should become quite popular. I created my own rival gang so it should be interesting. I would however go through the chapters that are already created and check spelling and grammer. I find that that's one of the most anoying things while reading an interactive story.
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Review of Secret War  
Review by Archivist
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Great intro. I'm really happy when I see an interactive story that gives you a lot of detail to begin with. There's just so many of them out now that have to do with the same thing over and over. With mine however I tried to give more chapters to start from so that people would have more to read and get into the story.
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Review of Affair  
Review by Archivist
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Wow!! I was in suspense the whole time. my mind kept asking 'did he do it?' I kept changing my mind on that answer till the very end. I also noticed how his thoughts kept twisting from the poor man who had just done the unthinkable to a man who's thoughts kept coming back to that of sex. nice attention to detail. I loved every moment of your story. It felt so real.
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Review of Silent Witness  
Review by Archivist
Rated: E | (4.5)
The lifetime friend to a lonely young woman. The mirror's pain reflects that of the teenager on the other side. I think a mirror was a perfect choice as the narrarator of the story. I loved the way that the teenager and the mirror seemed to have similar feelings. The mirror wanted to reach out and so did the girl. All in all I can't see anything I would change in this story. The only thing is that although it's really good this story doesn't really stand out in my mind from all the rest.

Your work does intrigue me though so I'll probably look for more work you've done
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Review by Archivist
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
So far so good, but there isn't enough to make an accurate opinion on it. also check for spelling mistakes.

if you write more let me know.
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