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Review of Awakening.  
Review by bluecrystal1
Rated: E | (3.0)
Love what you wrote, it makes people think. I believe the core is a heart, the very core of our being, the very reason why any of us exist. Wouldn't it be funny, if what you writes true.....people continue to dig, and take everything from Mother Earth, leave nothing in return, no love, no care, no regards and she becomes, as unloved, cold, dead and bare as the moon? Very sad. People who talk this way aren't crazy at all, this is true. Just like the elementary school book, The Giving Tree, one can inly give to another so much, without being loved and helped to be replenished, then it could even over time result in the giving souls, own death. A tree, can die, but it can grow back again. Do we really want to keep taking from Mother Earth and not plant trees, recycle and care? I do my parts for her as much as I can. Why don't we start by taking everything we know thats bad, such as the chemicals we use to kill bugs with, (give people a job who need one to work in farmer fields to hand pick off bugs off of the crops, which can further enable people to have a job instead of shooting each other and stealing and eliminate chemicals off of Mother Earth), stop using all plastic bags, use containers made out of veramics or stone which can be reused and last for a lifetime, stop using coal, gasoline, etc. and invent all vehicles used for traveling purposes to work on having the ability to run on a combination of the 4 elements, Earth, water, fire and oxyen or air (this way, the coal and gasoline industries can sell this instead of gasoline and can still make profit), this way if there's no light source out, the vehicles can run on the other three elements, as back up sources to continue to work. Just a few ideas I had. We need to stop mouthing off saying we need to do this and that, and take action and do these things, before it's toolate, for all of us. Stop saying and telling us youll do this and that, and you never do it. Stop telling us what to do, and never tell us exactly what it is, we need to do, not giving us any suggestions on how to improve things for the better for us all.

Thanks fenris, I love you and wolves in general. We all are a great teacher. Some are good, neutral or evil, it's a choice. All teachers matter, some learn one way or the ither. Some refuse to learn. Some learn by observations and watchibg and observing others through wisdom, and many only learn, through war, death and destruction.
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Review of Suffered Love  
Review by bluecrystal1
Rated: E | (2.5)
Then perhaps you should get a new love of your life and just let her go. Why not? She's never with you anyway. Let her go and get a princess who can be there instead of ine that never can be.
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Review of A-mused  
Review by bluecrystal1
Rated: E | (4.5)
Cute! Paints a beautiful image in my mind. I loved this thank you!
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