I can see why this won a contest, as it is really outstanding. Every word is true and should be practiced by everyone, everyday. It is so much easier to be positive and offer a smile instead of a negative, critical remark. Impulse thinking and being too quick to judge has caused many to have problems. When people stay in the negative zone, it is like having a dark cloud hang over their head, and projects to other people. Your poem is the perfect example of feelings from the heart, soul, and the Golden Rule.
This is beautiful and well written and I enjoyed reading it, and I got such a feeling of showing kindness towards others.
Keep writing and smiling. :)
This was truly a beautiful story, well written and from the heart. When I read something this touching, I like to tell the author, and hope to read the next one.
Memories should be cherished, written, and shared with other loved ones. It's good to have these feelings and stories to remind us how lucky we are to have
a special mother in our lives. Your writing flows from your memories, be it sad or happy, and you should be very proud of this essay.
Keep writing and stay positive each day.
This is wonderful and your story made me feel like I was there, too. You have recalled your memories of your uncle with much feeling straight from the heart. This is very well put together and would make a great novel or short story based on your family and life. Too many times I think us older people feel that we don't have anything to say or pass on to others, but we do, and it's called history of living and learning.
I've really enjoyed reading this and hope to read some of your other work, as well.
All of these are so true and great reminders for the way we should all live.
I have been told some of these suggestions and some I have tried to live by and pass on to family and friends.
During my years of working I tried to live by some of these examples, feeling better for doing so.
You have written everything that matters and thank you for doing so.
Life would be so great if people could practice these wonderful rules and thoughts each day.
Thank you for writing this, keep writing, keep smiling, and enjoy each day to the fullest.
This really touched my heart.
I'm not only a grandmother, but also a great grandmother.
You have written this very well and from your heart.
Who cares if it rhymes or not, it is the content that matters.
The spelling and grammar were good, but then again, I'm not an expert.
I don't write poetry but love to read others work.
Keep writing and keep those memories alive.
My grandmother was very special to me, and I have wonderful memories of her.
This is so witty and cute.
It tells the story of cow dogs for sure.
You have written another one "for the book."
I don't know if you have or have ever had a cow dog, but
they are really smart dogs and great for the farm or ranch.
Keep writing so others can keep reading.........................................
This is a really fantastic poem!
I enjoyed reading it and almost felt the pain of the writing.
You captured the heart break of life and loving and I commend you.
There is life after love and I feel your poem tells us to go on living.
I wish I could write poetry, but for now I will just admire the many who do.
Good luck and keep writing.
I truly enjoyed your poem.
As a newly retired person, I can relate to every word you have written.
Your work is very good and gets your message out with each word.
I have never tried writing poetry, but do enjoy reading it, and admire the people
who do write it well.!
I am new to WDC and only review with my feelings, rather than grammar, etc.
When I read something and it makes me smile, cry, or feel what the author has written,
then I want to review and compliment the work.
Keep writing and enjoy the quietness of being retired..
SMILE! THERE IS ONLY ONE TODAY Make it a masterpiece...................................................
Just passing through and noticed your group.
When I was very young I remember sitting and listening to my parents and grandparents talk about
"the old times", and how it was when they were growing up.
Now that I'm retired and have time on my hands I guess I will do the same.
It seems like the years gone by had the best memories and were filled with fun and friends.
I hope to do some writing about my past and also to do all of the hobbies and projects I never had time to
do when I was working TOO MUCH.
I live in Texas and have family history to explore and share.
See ya'll soon.......................................
I thought this poem was very beautiful and touching.
The warmth that it was written with came through with more than just the words.
The Blink of an eye says a lot about life and how short it can be here on earth.
Your poem flows and blends with correct spelling and grammar.
I only wish I could write poetry with such a beautiful message.
If I wanted to send someone words of comfort, this would be perfect.
Keep writing...............................................
Your western poems are like looking at a painting as described by your words.
There is history and imagination written with every word and conveys true cowboy flavor.
I see and feel the romance of the old western times, but I'm sure any cowboy working on
a ranch would say different.
This should be another heart felt poem for your BOOK.
Keep writing and Happy trails to you......................................
This is great!
Such a short, simple poem, but paints the picture of your memories and thoughts.
I'm not familiar with poetry, poems, and such, but I'm learning.
This is warm and enjoyable. Keep writing..............................................
I really enjoyed reading this and it ended with me wanting to know what happens next.
It is true to life, and could be almost any father in this situation.
I think as parents, we have all been there, or close to it.
I'm new to WDC and don't comment on spelling or grammar too much, just the story.
The story gives a mental visual of what is happening, so you have put the readers in the moment.
This is put together very well and keep writing.
This is just beautiful and the words flow like the rivers in the poem.
I believe it takes readers to a place of contentment and beauty.
When reading something that makes me cry, laugh, or transport me to the body of the poem,
then I know the author has accomplished their purpose for writing.
You have such talent and really should publish your work for all to enjoy.
A bonus of getting paid for your work would be icing on the cake.
As always, the grammar and spelling are perfect, but I don't look for those things as
much as just trying to FEEL the true meaning of the poem.
It's a poem that takes the reader away from the real world for just a short time.
Keep writing ........................................
This is great! No animal lover could pass this up or not feel the compassion.
Your words flowed with ease and the form looks good.
What a wonderful story to write about in the form of a poem.
I am not only new to writing.com, but have never tried writing poetry, so I
don't feel qualified to review in great detail, but I do like the story of it.
Good job!
Another well written verse! You have quiet a knack for writing these poems and I can see your love for the old west and
the western shows we all used to watch as kids.
You have captured the flavor and memories of the best of times as kids.
I think your work would make a great book and make for excellent reading.
These are wonderful poems and you make writing them look so easy.
I look forward to seeing more of your work and keep on writing.
This is a great poem and I think you have a lot of talent.
The spelling and grammar are good and the form is laid out very well.
By the time you finish school you will be well on your way to writing.
Keep up the good work and remember that we are never too old
to learn something new each day. I think your future is in you pen.
This is wonderful! It comes together very well, with great imagination. It is a story in a poem bringing mixed emotions
and time lines.
I especially liked the last two lines, as they show your past, present, and future.
It shows hope for the world in making it a better place for all.
Keep up the good work and I think you have a lot of talent.
I wish you good luck and happy writing.
Your poem is very enjoyable and reading it put me in the middle of all the action of the work on the ranch.
Reading your descriptive actions was like seeing a beautiful painting of an old western movie.
I think it was put together well, almost like a melody that could be sang out on the prairie.
You sound like a real cowboy or at least someone that has done some ranch work.
I truly enjoyed reading it and almost wished it was a bit longer so I could "hear" more of your story.
Keep up the good work and you should be proud of your work. You have a lot of talent.
This is so true and does work. People are living too fast and not enjoying each day.
You have put this together so well and I enjoyed reading it.
Keep up the good work and good luck with your future projects.
I am a newbie too and hope to learn all of the proper writing skills to make my work worth reading, too.
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