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Review of My Favorite Bison  
Review by Carole Rae
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
What a wonderful story! I simply would love to meet this bison. Bisons are adorable!
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Review of Sinking Ship  
Review by Carole Rae
Rated: E | (5.0)
hahaha that was my first madlib done on this website. SO FUN! Good little story.
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Review of One Rare Day  
Review by Carole Rae
Rated: E | (4.0)
Oooooh I utterly love this. Even though the 9th Doctor isn't my favorite, I still adore him. You certainly brought these character alive with your words. You have a great choice of words that suck the reader in. The only thing I would edit is the format of the story like combining a couple of the lines to make it a paragraph. :)
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Review of If I  
Review by Carole Rae
Rated: E | (4.5)
Fantastic poem! I loved it! I know a lot of people hate repetition, but I simply applaud it if done right! And right you did. :)
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Review by Carole Rae
Rated: E | (3.5)
I really love this story. I wish that you would do more with it! I want to know how it ends. :) The only thing I would edit is the beginning two sentences, "It was spring. A glorious spring!" Perhaps blend the two, because it really doesn't catch the eye. Maybe something like, "It was a glorious spring after a cold, rough winter." Other then that, the paragraph is intriguing. :)
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Review of . . .Okay  
Review by Carole Rae
Rated: E | (4.0)
I love it! Good job! You keep impressing me!
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