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Review by Jaiam
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A wonderful summing up of the most important question in this life: "What is it that I truly believe?"
A breath of very fresh air and as soul stirring as anything I have read in a very long time.

My favorite verse is:

"I want continuous, conscious awareness of His Presence in my life."

How much would change in this world if most of us remained aware that stayed aware of God's presence!!!
God bless in the new year and thank you for sharing.


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Review of September  
Review by Jaiam
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You have pulled of a very hard task in crafting a wonderful poem restricted to the letters of the month of September for the first words of each line. No space is wasted and the links to past memories adds nicely to it all. Very well done an a absolute pleasure to read - thanks for sharing - Jay
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Review of Drizzle on a Lake  
Review by Jaiam
In affiliation with Dream Team HQ  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A very beautiful and descriptive poem. You have captured a great deal of detail in a very short space and allowed the reader to envision the shore-side you describe in the poem. Very, very well done indeed.

My favorite verse is:
"On a weathered bench, shore-side I lingered In a mist of cold and fog."
It rings with a sense of peace - thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest - Jay
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Review by Jaiam
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A very satisfying and deeply spiritual piece of poetic writing here. I greatly enjoyed every line of this very faith filled poem. It is a pleasure to review it and award it a ribbon - thank you for sharing this with all of us here at WDC - God bless, Jay
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Review of Dreams Of Freedom  
Review by Jaiam
In affiliation with Dream Team HQ  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nice - what a wonderful world you describe here, what a wonderful place it would be. Thanks for sharing this - Jay


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Review by Jaiam
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Rated: E | (5.0)
very cool - tkx for sharing - j
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Review by Jaiam
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Rated: E | N/A (Unratable.)
It was a really pleasure to read this, and while I remember a slightly different version from my childhood I am happy to admit - it made me smile widely. I hope you will keep on sharing and brightening all our time here at Writing Dot Com. God bless and have a wonderful weekend - J
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Review of Daughter of God  
Review by Jaiam
In affiliation with Dream Team HQ  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very beautiful work you have done here. It was a pleasure to read and I hope you will enjoy your time here at Writing Dot Com. It is always a pleasure to read positive, uplifting work - "Daughter of God!" Keep sharing and may God bless you and inspire you to write on - J
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Review of Sins  
Review by Jaiam
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Could not agree more with your poem! It seems these days anything goes and no one wants the responsibility that comes with the choices or decisions being made. I fear sooner, rather than later, this will all catch up to us collectively. But, I also believe God will have the final word will every soul, and woe to any who have earned His almighty wrath - thanks for sharing this wonderful reminder with us all - God bless, Jay
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Review of Music To My Soul  
Review by Jaiam
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Very well written work here - I have not enjoyed a poem this much in a long while - it is peaceful, if that is possible for written words to be!

My favorite line is:

"Their song of joy of going home
fills the evening as the stars begin
to twinkle above"

So descriptive I can almost see this image in my mind!!

Thanks for sharing and Happy Anniversary - jay

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Review of A Mother  
Review by Jaiam
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Really like this poem, as it speaks to the respect you have for someone who really gets the "love your neighbor as yourself" rule. How much better we all could live if people did anything like this for the children given into their care. The world would change in a single generation! A very special mother indeed!!!



My favorite verse is this one:

"Above all else, she is a mother who
teaches them the important things in life,
disciplines them in love and wisdom,
and gives them hope for a brighter future.

Thank God for women like this - they plants the seeds for a better world for us all!!!


Have a Happy Anniversary as well - J

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Review of A Wise Lesson  
Review by Jaiam
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Rated: E
Very funny, yet full of wisdom worthy of Soloman himself. Never really thought about the problems he must have had trying to keep his "families" happy!!! Better to make one spouse content and count that as being "wise" enough. Thanks for sharing this with us at WDC - and Happy Anniversary - J


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Review of The Bridge  
Review by Jaiam
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Rated: E | (5.0)
What a great tale told in a very few words!!! Friendship, betrayal, fear, false courage and greed - ain't that a story that could be told anytime in any land. Well done, storyteller, very well done.


My favorite line of this story is:

"Yeah. I'm not scared."

But are not we all when faced with the unknown?

Again, well done and Happy Anniversary - Jay

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Review by Jaiam
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Rated: E | (5.0)
What a refreshing and "hope" filled poem this is! It reminds the reader that there is always some good in this world, even at the darkest moments of life. That is so important, yet so easy to forget. Thank you for reminding us in such a plesaent way.
My favorite line is:

"the beauty surrounding us comforted us,
assuring us we would once more know happiness."

I believe it captures the essence of the message you mean for the reader to receive!!! Well done and Happy Anniversary. Enjoy your weekend - Jaiam


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Review of Absence of Time  
Review by Jaiam
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nicely done! This poem tells the reader about a place and time where the busy world can be set aside for a little while and a different aspect of "life" can be enjoyed, even if only for a little bit. This is a hard thing for a writer to pull off and you have done it quite nicely in this wonderful little jewel of a poem. Well done!!!

My favorite line of this poem is:

"I bask in this timeless place,
and my spirit enjoys rest."

It sounds very peaceful and gives the reader the opportunity to share in this blissful moment! Again, well done and have a great Anniversary here at WDC.

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Review by Jaiam
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Very precious picture with an even more precious message about the Savior - Christ The King! A great reminder of how Jesus began His effort for our redemption - thank you for sharing this inspiring and timeless image with all of here at WDC.

Wish you an wonderful Easter and GOD bless - Jaiam



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Review by Jaiam
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A truly beautiful depiction of a great family reunion. Perfectly timed and presented to reflect this blessed Easter Season. This is a wonderful read and quite uplifting and the last verse in by far my favorite. Thank you for the opportunity to share in this and good luck in the contest - Jaiam

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Review by Jaiam
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very impressive poem about all of our relationship to the Omnipotent God of everything. Very deeply descriptive and makes one think about your personal relationship with Him. Thank you for sharing and please keep writing and sharing with us all here at WDC. God bless and have a great week - J

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Review by Jaiam
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Very beautiful and wonderfully flowing poem. I very much enjoyed this read. My favorite line:The tempest came; Now growing tame,
Glides gently by. 'Twill go asleep, In the deep, Of the sky.

Reminds me that even the worst of will pass with time. Well done and Happy Easter - Jaiam


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Review of Inside India 2010  
Review by Jaiam
Rated: E | (5.0)
As I mentioned earlier, this is exceptional writing. It places the reader into the environment and let's one experience the scenes through your eyes. Wonderfully done! Best of luck with getting it published, as it deserves to be shared with a wider group of readers - peace, Jay
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Review by Jaiam
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a truly beautiful work. Best of all luck in the end of month contest and GOD Bless - Jai
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