This story is so amazing, I felt like I was right there every minute of Rory's journey throughout this chapter, and I'm excited to read the next parts of the story. Just know that I believe you are a great author, and you should continue to make great works like this.
I think that this is a very creative idea, the fact that little fae could be hiding in our world with the use of a magical stone, and that many of our myths popped up whenever the magic hiding them failed for some time, allowing us to see them. Keep up the good work!
This sounds like such a cool idea, I wish my life was a video game. The fact that this sounds plausible by 2091 is very exciting, and it makes me feel envious of what future generations will be able to experience as technological advancements are made.
Realmente me gustó la historia, y el elemento de azar sobre quién será reducido realmente me mantuvo en mi asiento, y también me gustó mucho la otra versión de esta historia. La versión en otro idioma también fue muy buena, ya que fue agradable leer la historia en varios idiomas.
Realmente me gustó la historia, y el elemento de azar sobre quién será reducido realmente me mantuvo en mi asiento, y también me gustó mucho la otra versión de esta historia. La versión en otro idioma también fue muy buena, ya que fue agradable leer la historia en varios idiomas.
I really liked this story, as it was right up my alley. I also really liked the use of Nintendo characters, as I am both a fan of Zelda and other popular Nintendo games. I also loved the idea of shrunken feet play. The story was really good and was just the right size.
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